Piece Comment

Review of Local News Sucks


i love this piece. while a tad rough, i like the sound of the news clips.

it sounds as if you're sitting on a couch, watching the news, and talking about it.

i don't understand why people keep saying the soundquality of the clips sucks, when i like it. it sounds like we're actually watching the news, not just some lameass soundbite.

while ben needs to add a little emotion (he sounds like he's reading), i think this is a strong piece, and i think i'm going to feature it on my teen show.

i like how he emphasizes the title of the piece "tortured teens" by repeating it... "tortured teens"... ok... don't get me started on that because i want to smack that news writer upside the head.

well done ben. keep it up!