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- Chris Flynn
- Username: ChrisFlynn
- Location: Chicago, United Kingdom
- Joined PRX: Oct 05, 2007
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- "Saying Good Bye To Food"
- Summary: Rocky takes listeners through the decision to have weight loss surgery and the aftermath
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Review of Saying Good Bye To Food
Chris Flynn
Posted on November 09, 2007 at 08:11 AM
This story was a grand display of human emotion. It tells a tale of how obesity is a major problem, and how one guy made his own decisions to prevent another death from obesity. What really worked was when your family told you that exercise and eating healthier was something you HAD to do, while the doctor on the talk show said it was nigh impossible. It told the world how the main solution to a big problem wasn't exactly the answer, dedication or not.
Music or not, I thought the piece still functioned well. Your narration was well done, and the inclusion of the everday conversations worked. Although they didn't come across as totally natural, but that is something that happens when someone has a mic join in the conversation.
All in all, a great piece, and I thought it was professionally done. Bravo.