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great writing, irritating production


Ryan Gossen

Posted on May 29, 2009 at 06:05 PM

The uptight delivery and skippy dippy musical interludes do not quite bury the subtly of the verse. This is delivered as oratory, but the tone of the witting is conversational. I want to hear more though.

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  • Ryan Gossen
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  • "My Dad and Pre-Socratic Thought"
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  • Summary: A man recalls the crazy stories his father told him, and within those stories he attempts to explain his father, which requires he explain about the peanut butter torture, discipline by prosthetic arm, and a trustworthy drunk.

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