The power of plastic! > Comments > "levels"
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- Molly Adams
- Username: thefreemolly
- Location: Chicago, Illinois
- Joined PRX: Oct 11, 2005
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- "The power of plastic!"
- Summary: For some teens, few things can compare with the feeling of getting a drivers license! Once you have it, freedom and endless adventures lie ahead!
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levels
Molly Adams
Posted on June 14, 2010 at 11:07 AM
i think this piece is hilarious and there are so many stories involved with driving and first times driving. nice diversity of voices.
those levels aren't too hard to fix. watch your levels as you're editing, instead of going by your ears. you can even turn the sound off and just make they're consistent. also, new bit of criticism, slow down a bit while reading. cause your writing is smart and you swallow some of your best lines.
i love when the music cuts out as the guy gets a speeding ticket! good comic timing.