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- Mara Fink
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- Location: Saint Louis Park, Minnesota
- Joined PRX: Jun 03, 2010
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- "Poor Health of Quartermaster Harbor"
- Summary: As Weekday High?s Noah Katz reports, the health of Quartermaster Harbor is in serious decline.
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Review of "Poor Health of Quartermaster Harbor"
Mara Fink
Posted on August 12, 2010 at 06:05 PM
Noah does a great job in this story of thoroughly researching the issues he talks about and explaining them clearly for the lay person. I liked how he opened with the introduction of Steve Hayworth because it added a personal dimension to the story. It was also great that after Hayworth he went to a teacher who would have more “credibility” on the issue. I think it also would have been helpful to have someone from the county talk about the issue as well, since Hayworth blames them, it’s important to give them a chance to defend themselves. Noah does a great job with his voicing as well; overall an interesting story.