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- Jemima williams
- Username: JemimaW
- Location: Brooklyn, New York
- Joined PRX: Oct 01, 2010
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- "The Future Sucks"
- Summary: I felt nervous about changes in technology and unsure of where the future was heading. I knew I was not the only one. Was I the only one?
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Constructive
Jemima williams
Posted on November 17, 2010 at 06:11 PM
hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. This topic was acutally a great choice. The transition of playing the radio was really unique. My only construction would be to give time in between the different voices. You can fade in and out of people, instead of jumping from one voice to another. Other than that you did a excellent. Good Job!