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- Jemima williams
- Username: JemimaW
- Location: Brooklyn, New York
- Joined PRX: Oct 01, 2010
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- "Back of the Head"
- Summary: No matter who you are, each one of us has a story and you can never be sure of what is true about someone until you get to know theirs. This is Lexi, and though on the outside she may seem pretty perfect, there is much more beyond the surface.
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Constructive
Jemima williams
Posted on November 26, 2010 at 09:48 PM
Hello My name is Jemima, and I would like to congratulate you on completing this piece. I actually appreciate you chose this topic to do. Stereotypes are an unfortunate judgement, and is wrong to commit. Your diction was very clear, along with the tone in your voice. I would suggest a bit of transition music next time though. Great Job!