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- Jemima williams
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- "Where do you go to find peace?"
- Summary: Where do you go to find peace?
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Constructive
Jemima williams
Posted on December 24, 2010 at 01:10 PM
Hello my name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congratulate you on creating this radio documentary piece. This is taking a step into journalism, by sharing and expressing yourself. I would suggest the diction to be a bit clearer, and transition music. Other than that you did good. Great Job!