A day in the Life: Kids in America and Europe fight for the environment > Comments > "Dynamic youth produced story"
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- Aviva Hirsch
- Username: Aviva
- Location: Anchorage, Alaska
- Joined PRX: May 13, 2010
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- "A day in the Life: Kids in America and Europe fight for the environment"
- Summary: A world premier: For the very first time, radio kids from both side of the Atlantic have produced a common "green" radio show!
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Dynamic youth produced story
Aviva Hirsch
Posted on July 10, 2011 at 04:08 PM
This piece is dynamic and informative. The voicing is enthusiastic and interesting because there is such a variety in voices and accents. My only critique is thinking about being authentic when scripting and voicing radio stories. This piece sounds like it is geared towards children. To widen the audience, the readers would simply need to talk in a more conversational tone. I enjoyed the sound bites of music and the topic of the story.