Beautiful Winter > Comments > "Winter wonderland!"
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- Leona Smith
- Username: leonasmith
- Location: Chelsea, Massachusetts
- Joined PRX: Sep 29, 2011
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- "Beautiful Winter"
- Summary: Minneapolis Edison student Kalia Xiong tells that there is a lot to like in Winter.
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Winter wonderland!
Leona Smith
Posted on November 04, 2011 at 10:03 AM
This piece is very opinionated, which makes this a very good piece. It is convincing. I like the winter, so that I can relate to this piece. She shares her love for the things that go on in the winter which can give everybody else ideas on what to do.
The piece is a little short. It would be even better than what it is if it was longer.