Slip of the Tongue > Comments > "Thats not makeup, but make believe."
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- rachel snow
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- "Slip of the Tongue"
- Summary: Adriel Luis takes a different spin on the subject of beauty.
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Thats not makeup, but make believe.
rachel snow
Posted on August 27, 2012 at 06:04 PM
Adriel's words are powerful, and recited in a powerful way. The poem provides exceptional imagery and metaphors. It was interesting to hear what a boy thinks and feels versus how he acts in a situation where he is attracted to another girl and it was amusing to have the female character so quickly reject. The message about valuing your roots and not comparing yourself to others comes across loud and clear. I think it is important for women especially teens to hear this message because the media is constantly telling them otherwise.