This piece has some very powerful and interesting things to say about music but it needs more direction. The first half talks about an individual’s personal connection they listen to and the second is about how music is unlawfully downloaded and flaws in the music industry. While these both are important topics it feels like Max is trying to fit too much information into one piece. The sound mixing is is just right, with just a low hum fading in and out with Max’s humble voice. It is very hard to sum up what music means to ones self, and Max took on the big question with good thought and good emotion.