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- Jemima williams
- Username: JemimaW
- Location: Brooklyn, New York
- Joined PRX: Oct 01, 2010
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- "Teen Violence Hurts Everyone"
- Summary: The KFAI Youth News Initiative creates a platform for young women of color to give their unique perspective on issues they face in their communities.
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Constructive
Jemima williams
Posted on October 15, 2010 at 06:24 PM
Hello! My name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. This topic was a smart choice, because it is a very touchy subject. The questions were on point, along with the responses. The length of the peice was decent, but next time try to stretch it out a bit. Also, adding background music would knock this piece up 2 levels! The dicton was clear, but sounded just a tad scripted. Otherwise, your piece was well thought out recorded. Good Job!