Summary: The KFAI Youth News Initiative creates a platform for young women of color to give their unique perspective on issues they face in their communities.
Hello! My name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. This topic was a smart choice, because it is a very touchy subject. The questions were on point, along with the responses. The length of the peice was decent, but next time try to stretch it out a bit. Also, adding background music would knock this piece up 2 levels! The dicton was clear, but sounded just a tad scripted. Otherwise, your piece was well thought out recorded. Good Job!
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Jemima williams
Posted on October 15, 2010 at 06:24 PM | Permalink
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Hello! My name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. This topic was a smart choice, because it is a very touchy subject. The questions were on point, along with the responses. The length of the peice was decent, but next time try to stretch it out a bit. Also, adding background music would knock this piece up 2 levels! The dicton was clear, but sounded just a tad scripted. Otherwise, your piece was well thought out recorded. Good Job!