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- Jemima williams
- Username: JemimaW
- Location: Brooklyn, New York
- Joined PRX: Oct 01, 2010
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- "It's Not Easy Being Green"
- Summary: Seventeen-year-old A. Greene has one simple problem with the environmental "green" movement: it just doesn't seem all that green to her.
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Constructive
Jemima williams
Posted on November 17, 2010 at 06:33 PM
Hello! My name is Jemima, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congradulate you on completing this piece. I like this idea of choosing this topic. The diction was clear. I would suggest music to begin your piece the same way it is used to end the piece. Otherwise this piece was great. Good Job!