It's Not Easy Being Green > Comments > "Hopi High School"
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- Darin Johnson
- Username: DarinJohnson
- Location: Second Mesa, Arizona
- Joined PRX: Mar 01, 2011
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- "It's Not Easy Being Green"
- Summary: Seventeen-year-old A. Greene has one simple problem with the environmental "green" movement: it just doesn't seem all that green to her.
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Hopi High School
Darin Johnson
Posted on March 30, 2011 at 07:05 PM
The piece was on topic. I feel that a little bit more emotion added to your tone? Going green is something more serious that we need to do. One act of making an effort to go green can make a big difference. Good job on the piece though. I would also suggest setting the mode and tone in the intro, as well as the outro, But once again great job.